{"id":2402,"date":"2021-08-15T17:58:11","date_gmt":"2021-08-15T08:58:11","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.bba.la\/?page_id=2402"},"modified":"2026-02-18T22:37:30","modified_gmt":"2026-02-18T13:37:30","slug":"%e8%8b%b1%e6%96%87%e3%83%ac%e3%82%bf%e3%83%bc","status":"publish","type":"page","link":"https:\/\/www.bba.la\/?page_id=2402","title":{"rendered":"\u82f1\u6587\u6dfb\u524a"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<h1><span style=\"background-color: #008000; color: #ffffff;\">\uff12\uff10\uff12\uff16\u5e74\uff12\u6708\uff17\u65e5<\/span><\/h1>\n<p><span style=\"font-size: 18pt;\">\u4eac\u5927\u306b\u30c1\u30e3\u30ec\u30f3\u30b8\u3059\u308b\u9ad8\uff13\u306b\u3088\u308b<\/span><span style=\"font-size: 18pt;\">\u4eac\u5927\u904e\u53bb\u554f\u984c\u306e\u89e3\u7b54\u3067\u3059\u3002<\/span><\/p>\n<p>\u4eba\u9593\u306e\u60f3\u50cf\u529b\u306f\u4eba\u5de5\u77e5\u80fd\u306e\u666e\u53ca\u306b\u3088\u3063\u3066\u8c4a\u304b\u306b\u306a\u308b\u3001\u3042\u308b\u3044\u306f\u3001\u4eba\u9593\u306e\u60f3\u50cf\u529b\u306f\u4eba\u5de5\u77e5\u80fd\u306e\u666e\u53ca\u306b\u3088\u3063\u3066\u4e4f\u3057\u304f\u306a\u308b\u3001\u306e\u3069\u3061\u3089\u304b\u306e\u4e3b\u5f35\u3092\u9078\u629e\u3057\u3001\u305d\u306e\u4e3b\u5f35\u3092\u8ad6\u8a3c\u3059\u308b\u82f1\u6587\u3092\u66f8\u304d\u306a\u3055\u3044\u3002<\/p>\n<p>\u30fb\u9078\u629e\u3057\u305f\u4e3b\u5f35\u3092\u63d0\u793a\u3059\u308b\u6587<\/p>\n<p>\u30fb\u7406\u7531\u3084\u4f8b\u306a\u3069\u3092\u8ff0\u3079\u3066\u4e3b\u5f35\u306e\u59a5\u5f53\u6027\u3092\u8ad6\u8a3c\u3059\u308b\u6587<\/p>\n<p>\u305d\u308c\u307e\u3067\u306e\u8ad6\u8a3c\u3092\u7dcf\u62ec\u3059\u308b\u6587\u00a0 80~100words<\/p>\n<p>Original)<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><u>I think\u00a0our ability to imagine will reduce because of artificial intelligence.<\/u><br \/>(2) <u>When we ask it to write some reports or draw pictures<\/u>, (3) <u>it\u00a0immediately responds our requirements<\/u>. (3)\u2019<u> The response will be fast and diverse.<\/u><br \/>(4)<u> If we\u00a0depend on it to save our time and effort<\/u> , (5)<u> this could lead to less imagination<\/u>. (6) <u>We do not need to think or imagine for a long time <\/u>(6)\u2019<u> to create our original things<\/u>. (7<u>) Also, we often do not judge whether the reports and the pictures are written by it, <\/u>(8) <u>so we will become to use it more often once we begin to use it.<\/u>\u00a0 \u00a0(98 words)<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>Corrections)<\/p>\n<p><u>I believe that human imagination will likely <strong>decline<\/strong> if we rely on AI too much<\/u>.<\/p>\n<p><u>By allowing AI to write reports or draw charts<\/u>, (3) <u>we can immediately obtain various excellent results<\/u>. (3)\u2019 (4) <u>However, if we depend excessively on AI to save time and effort<\/u>, (5) <u>human creativity will eventually <strong>diminish<\/strong><\/u>. (6) <u>Since we no longer <strong>exert<\/strong> our own thought and imagination<\/u>, (6)\u2019 <u>no new ideas will be created<\/u>. (7) <u>Furthermore, we will not be able to differentiate human ideas from those of AI<\/u>.<\/p>\n<p>(8) <u>In conclusion, excessive dependence on AI will <strong>stifle<\/strong> the development of\u00a0 \u00a0human intelligence.<\/u> \u3000<\/p>\n<p>(91 words)<\/p>\n<p>\u7dcf\u8a55\uff09\u307e\u305a\u3001\u89e3\u7b54\uff13\u6761\u4ef6\u3092\u5341\u5206\u6e80\u305f\u3057\u3066\u3044\u306a\u3044\u3002\u300c\u8ad6\u8a3c\u3092\u7dcf\u62ec\u3059\u308b\u6587\u300d\u304c\u898b\u5f53\u305f\u3089\u306a\u3044\u3002\uff08\uff18\uff09\u3060\u3068\u3059\u308c\u3070\u7dcf\u62ec\u3068\u306a\u3063\u3066\u3044\u306a\u3044\u3002\u6b21\u306b\u3001\u66d6\u6627\u306a\u8868\u73fe\u304c\u3042\u308a\u30af\u30ea\u30a2\u306a\u7406\u89e3\u306b\u82e6\u3057\u3080\u6240\u304c\u3042\u308b\u3002\u4e3b\u306b\u8ad6\u8ff0\u306e\u9032\u3081\u65b9\u3001\u82f1\u6587\u69cb\u6210\u3001\u9078\u629e\u3059\u308b\u8a9e\u5f59\u306e\u554f\u984c\u304b\u3089\u8d77\u3053\u3063\u3066\u3044\u308b\u3002\u8a73\u7d30\u3067\u89e3\u8aac\u3059\u308b\u3002<\/p>\n<p>\u5c1a\u3001\u82f1\u6587\u4e2d\u306e\u592a\u5b57\u306f\u5f79\u7acb\u3064\u306e\u3067\u899a\u3048\u3066\u4e0b\u3055\u3044\u3002<\/p>\n<p>\u8a73\u7d30\uff09\u66f8\u304d\u63db\u3048P<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>\u25b3\u3000reduce\u306f\u4ed6\u52d5\u8a5e\u3060\u304b\u3089decline\u306b\u3002because of~\u306f\u66d6\u6627\u8868\u73fe\u3002<\/li>\n<li>\u25b3\u3000 \u8868\u73fe\u306e\u4ed5\u65b9\u3000it\u306fAI\u3067\u4e00\u8cab\u3059\u308b\u3068\u8aad\u307f\u3084\u3059\u3044\u3002 P<\/li>\n<li>\u25b3\u3000respond to\u3000<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>\uff08\uff13\uff09\u2018\u3000\uff08\uff13\uff09\u306eimmediately\u3068\u540c\u610f\u306a\u306e\u3067\u7701\u304f\u3002<\/p>\n<p>\uff08\uff14\uff09\u25cb\u3000\u3000\u3088\u308a\u660e\u89e3\u306a\u8868\u73feP<\/p>\n<p>\uff08\uff15\uff09\u25b3\u3000\u8868\u73fe\u304c\u660e\u78ba\u3067\u306a\u3044\u3002P<\/p>\n<p>(6)(6)\u2019\u00a0 \u00d7\u3000think or imagine\u306e\u5f8c\u306b\u76ee\u7684\u8a9e\u304c\u5fc5\u8981\u3002\u7406\u89e3\u3057\u306b\u304f\u3044\u4e0d\u660e\u78ba\u306a\u8868\u73fe\u306a\u306e\u3067\u8a00\u308f\u3093\u3068\u3059\u308b\u5185\u5bb9\u3068\u79c1\u306e\u7406\u89e3\u304c\u305a\u308c\u3066\u3044\u308b\u304b\u3082\u3057\u308c\u307e\u305b\u3093\u304c\u3000(6)(6)\u2019\u306f\u82f1\u6587\u69cb\u6210\u3092P\u306e\u69d8\u306b\u66f8\u304d\u63db\u3048\u660e\u78ba\u306b\u3057\u307e\u3057\u305f\u3002<\/p>\n<p>\uff08\uff17\uff09\u00d7\u3000\u8868\u73fe\u304c\u7406\u89e3\u3067\u304d\u306a\u3044\u306e\u306fjudge\u3092\u4f7f\u3046\u304b\u3089\u3067\u3057\u3087\u3046\u3002P<\/p>\n<p>\uff08\uff18\uff09\u00d7\u3000become to\u306f\u4e0d\u53ef\u3002\u3053\u3053\u306f\u7de0\u3081\u62ec\u308a\u306e\u7dcf\u62ec\u6587\u306e\u306f\u305a\u306a\u306e\u3067\u5927\u5909\u91cd\u8981\u3067\u3059\u3002P<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p><strong><u>\u7dcf\u62ec\u3059\u308b\u6587\u3092\u660e\u78ba\u306b\u72ec\u7acb\u3055\u305b\u3066\u66f8\u304b\u306a\u3051\u308c\u3070\u3044\u3051\u306a\u3044\u3002\u672c\u756a\u3067\u3053\u306e\u4e16\u306a\u30df\u30b9\u3092\u3059\u308c\u3070\u52a0\u70b9\u3055\u308c\u307e\u305b\u3093\uff01<\/u><\/strong><\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<h1><span style=\"background-color: #008000; color: #ffffff;\">\uff12\uff10\uff12\uff16\u5e74\uff12\u6708\uff17\u65e5<\/span><\/h1>\n<p><span style=\"font-size: 18pt;\">\u6e96\uff11\u7d1a\u5408\u683c\u9ad8\uff12\u306e\u548c\u6587\u82f1\u8a33\u306e\u89e3\u7b54\u3067\u3059\u3002<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-size: 18pt;\">\u6bd4\u55a9\u8868\u73fe\u3092\u3069\u306e\u3088\u3046\u306b\u3057\u3066\u82f1\u6587\u5316\u3059\u308b\u304b\u3001\u96e3\u554f\u3067\u3059\u3002<\/span><\/p>\n<p>5) \u65b0\u81ea\u7531\u4e3b\u7fa9\u3067\u6f64\u3046\u3054\u304f\u4e00\u90e8\u306e\u4eba\u305f\u3061\u306f\u3001\u304a\u305d\u3089\u304f\u6c88\u307f\u3086\u304f\u8239\u304b\u3089\u6b8b\u3063\u305f\u8cc7\u7523\u3092\u6839\u3053\u305d\u304e\u53d6\u308b\u3053\u3068\u3057\u304b\u8003\u3048\u3066\u3044\u306a\u3044\u306e\u3060\u308d\u3046\u3002\u3067\u3082\u3001\u6b8b\u3055\u308c\u308b\u4eba\u305f\u3061\u306f\u3001\u76ee\u3092\u8986\u3044\u3001\u8033\u3092\u585e\u304e\u3001\u90fd\u5408\u306e\u60aa\u3044\u771f\u5b9f\u306b\u6c17\u304c\u3064\u304b\u306a\u3044\u3075\u308a\u3092\u3044\u3064\u307e\u3067\u7d9a\u3051\u308b\u306e\u3060\u308d\u3046\u3002\u307e\u308b\u3067\u7802\u306b\u982d\u3092\u57cb\u3081\u308b\u99dd\u9ce5\u307f\u305f\u3044\u306b\u3002<\/p>\n<p>Original)<\/p>\n<p>A small portion of people (1) <u>who benefit from neoliberalism<\/u> (2) <u>probably only think of<\/u> (3)<u> taking property <\/u>(4) f<u>rom a sinking ship completely<\/u>. However, how long will others continue to turn a blind eye, refuse to listen (5)<u> and pretend not to see<\/u> the uncomfortable truth? (6) <u>It&#8217;s<\/u> like (7) <u>an ostrich burying its heads<\/u> in the sand.<\/p>\n<p>Corrections)<\/p>\n<p>A small portion of people (1) <u>who have built their wealth through neoliberalism<\/u> (2) <u>may focus exclusively on<\/u> (3) <u>protecting their remaining property<\/u> (4) <u>as the economic system collapses like a sinking ship<\/u>. However, how long will others continue to turn a blind eye, refuse to listen, (5)<u> and ignore<\/u> the uncomfortable truth? (6) <u>They are behaving<\/u> like (7) <u>ostriches burying their heads in the sand<\/u>.<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u7dcf\u8a55\uff09\u65e5\u672c\u6587\u306f\u66d6\u6627\u3067\u6bd4\u55a9\u8868\u73fe\u3082\u3042\u308b\u306e\u3067\u3001\u8aad\u307f\u624b\u306e\u89e3\u91c8\u3067\u82f1\u6587\u3082\u5909\u308f\u308b\u53ef\u80fd\u6027\u304c\u3042\u308b\u96e3\u554f\u3067\u3059\u3002Original)\u306f\u3088\u304f\u66f8\u3051\u3066\u3044\u307e\u3059\u3002\u300c\u6c88\u307f\u3086\u304f\u8239\u304b\u3089\u6b8b\u3063\u305f\u8cc7\u7523\u3092\u6839\u3053\u305d\u304e\u53d6\u308b\u300d\u306f\u8aad\u307f\u624b\u306b\u3088\u308a\u89e3\u91c8\u306f\u7570\u306a\u308b\u304b\u3082\u3057\u308c\u307e\u305b\u3093\u3002<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>\u25b3\u3000\u3088\u308a\u660e\u78ba\u306a\u8868\u73fe\u3067\u3059\u3002<\/li>\n<li>\u25b3\u3000 may, exclusively<\/li>\n<li>\u25b3\u3000\u5225\u306e\u610f\u5473\u3067\u3082\u53d6\u308c\u307e\u3059\u304c\u8868\u73fe\u3057\u306b\u304f\u3044\u3002\u300c\u6f64\u3063\u3066\u3044\u308b\u4eba\u3005\u304c\u3055\u3089\u306b\u6c88\u307f\u304b\u3051\u305f\u8239\u304b\u3089\u6b8b\u308a\u3092\u53d6\u308d\u3046\u3068\u3059\u308b\u300d\u3067\u82f1\u8a33\u3057\u307e\u3057\u305f\u3002<\/li>\n<li>\u25b3\u3000\u3053\u3053\u304c\u3080\u3064\u304b\u3057\u3044\u3002\u7d4c\u6e08\u30b7\u30b9\u30c6\u30e0\u304c\u58ca\u308c\u3066\u3044\u304f\u306e\u3001\u6bd4\u55a9\u3067\u3059\u304b\u3089\u3002<\/li>\n<li>\u25b3\u3000pretend\u4f7f\u7528\u306f\u8aa4\u308a\u3067\u306f\u306a\u3044\u304c\u306a\u304f\u3068\u3082\u540c\u610f\u3068\u898b\u308b\u3053\u3068\u3082\u3067\u304d\u308b\u3002\u306a\u3044\u65b9\u304c\u30b7\u30f3\u30d7\u30eb\u3002<\/li>\n<li>\u00d7\u3000\u3053\u3053\u3067\u300c\u3075\u308a\u3092\u3057\u3066\u3044\u308b\u300d\u3092\u8868\u73fe\u3059\u308b\u3002<\/li>\n<li>\u25b3\u3000\u6163\u7528\u53e5\u3002<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<h1><span style=\"background-color: #008000; color: #ffffff;\">\uff12\uff10\uff12\uff16\u5e74\uff12\u6708\uff17\u65e5<\/span><\/h1>\n<p><span style=\"font-size: 18pt;\">\u9ad8\uff11\u548c\u6587\u82f1\u8a33\u306e\u89e3\u7b54\u3067\u3059\u3002<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-size: 18pt;\">\u82f1\u6587\u306b\u3069\u306e\u3088\u3046\u306b\u3057\u3066\u5909\u63db\u3055\u305b\u3066\u3044\u304f\u306e\u304b\u3092\u7406\u89e3\u3057\u59cb\u3081\u305f\u9ad8\uff11\u3067\u3059\u3002<\/span><\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u672c\u304c\u5206\u304b\u308a\u306b\u304f\u3044\u3068\u304d\u3001\u305d\u308c\u304c\u672c\u306e\u305b\u3044\u3067\u306f\u306a\u304f\u3001\u8aad\u8005\u306e\u65b9\u304c\u672a\u719f\u3067\u3042\u308b\u305f\u3081\u306e\u3053\u3068\u304c\u306a\u3044\u3067\u306f\u306a\u3044\u3002\u3053\u3046\u3044\u3046\u5834\u5408\u306b\u306f\u3001\u8aad\u8005\u81ea\u8eab\u306e\u6210\u9577\u3059\u308b\u65e5\u3092\u5f85\u3064\u3088\u308a\u307b\u304b\u306b\u624b\u304c\u306a\u3044\u3067\u3042\u308d\u3046\u3002\u540c\u3058\u672c\u3092\u3001\u5e74\u6708\u3092\u7d4c\u3066\u304b\u3089\u8aad\u307f\u901a\u3057\u3066\u307f\u308b\u3068\u3001\u3088\u304f\u308f\u304b\u3063\u3066\u9762\u767d\u304b\u3063\u305f\u3068\u3044\u3046\u7d4c\u9a13\u3092\u6301\u3064\u4eba\u306f\u5c11\u306a\u304f\u306a\u3044\u3068\u601d\u308f\u308c\u308b<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><u>\u672c\u304c\u5206\u304b\u308a\u306b\u304f\u3044\u3068\u304d<\/u>\u3001(2)<u>\u305d\u308c\u304c\u672c\u306e\u305b\u3044\u3067\u306f\u306a\u304f<\/u>\u3001(3)<u>\u8aad\u8005\u306e\u65b9\u304c\u672a\u719f\u3067\u3042\u308b\u305f\u3081\u306e\u3053\u3068\u304c\u306a\u3044\u3067\u306f\u306a\u3044<\/u>\u3002(4)<u>\u3053\u3046\u3044\u3046\u5834\u5408\u306b\u306f<\/u>\u3001(5) <u>\u8aad\u8005\u81ea\u8eab\u306e\u6210\u9577\u3059\u308b\u65e5\u3092\u5f85\u3064\u3088\u308a\u307b\u304b\u306b\u624b\u304c\u306a\u3044\u3067\u3042\u308d\u3046<\/u>\u3002(6) <u>\u540c\u3058\u672c\u3092\u3001\u5e74\u6708\u3092\u7d4c\u3066\u304b\u3089\u8aad\u307f\u901a\u3057\u3066\u307f\u308b\u3068<\/u>\u3001(7)<u>\u3088\u304f\u308f\u304b\u3063\u3066\u9762\u767d\u304b\u3063\u305f\u3068\u3044\u3046\u7d4c\u9a13\u3092\u6301\u3064\u4eba\u306f\u5c11\u306a\u304f\u306a\u3044\u3068\u601d\u308f\u308c\u308b\u3002<\/u><\/li>\n<li>\u00a0<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>Original)<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><u>When a book is difficult,<\/u> (2) <u>it is not because of a book,<\/u> (3) <u>but the reader is not inexperienced<\/u>.\u00a0<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>(4) <u>In this case<\/u>, (5)<u> no other way wait for the day the reader grows up<\/u>.\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>(6) <u>I think you read the same book after years<\/u>, (7) <u>many people who have the experience of understanding and interesting<\/u>.\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>Corrections)<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><u>When books seem difficult<\/u>, (2)<u> this may not be because they are inherently difficult<\/u>, (3) <u>but because readers are not yet mature enough to understand them<\/u>. (4) <u>In such cases<\/u>, (5) <u>readers may not fully grasp these books until they develop greater intellectual maturity<\/u>. (7) <u>Many people later realize that the same books become easier to understand and more interesting <\/u>(6) <u>when they reread them after several years<\/u>.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>\u7dcf\u8a55\uff09\u65e5\u672c\u6587\u3092\u305d\u306e\u307e\u307e\u82f1\u8a9e\u306b\u3057\u3088\u3046\u3068\u3059\u308b\u3068\u3080\u3064\u304b\u3057\u3044\u307e\u305f\u4e0d\u81ea\u7136\u306b\u306a\u308b\u5834\u5408\u306f\u3001\u81ea\u5206\u306e\u89e3\u91c8\u3067\u66f8\u304d\u76f4\u3059\u65b9\u304c\u826f\u3044\u3002\u305f\u3068\u3048\u3070\u3001(5)\u306e\u5143\u306e\u65e5\u672c\u6587\u306f\u300c\u8aad\u8005\u306f\u77e5\u7684\u306b\u6210\u9577\u3059\u308b\u307e\u3067\u3053\u3046\u3057\u305f\u672c\u3092\u5341\u5206\u7406\u89e3\u3057\u306a\u3044\u3060\u308d\u3046\u300d\u306a\u3069\u81ea\u5206\u306a\u308a\u306b\u8a00\u3044\u63db\u3048\u3066\u8a33\u3057\u3066\u3044\u304f\u5fc5\u8981\u304c\u3042\u308a\u307e\u3059\u3002<\/p>\n<p>\u6dfb\u524a\u306e\u82f1\u6587\u306f\u8f9e\u66f8\u3092\u5f15\u304d\u306a\u304c\u3089\u8a33\u51fa\u3092\u3057\u7406\u89e3\u3057\u3001\u898b\u306a\u3044\u3067\u66f8\u3051\u308b\u3088\u3046\u306b\u7df4\u7fd2\u3059\u308b\u3053\u3068\u3002<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>\u25cb<\/li>\n<li>\u25b3<\/li>\n<li>\u00d7<\/li>\n<li>\u25b3\u3000\u4e00\u822c\u8868\u73fe\u3092\u3059\u308b\u5834\u5408\u306f\u8907\u6570\u5f62\u306b\u3059\u308b\u3002a book \u2192books<\/li>\n<li>\u00d7<\/li>\n<li>\u25b3\u3000I think that when you read~\u3000\u306e\u3088\u3046\u306bwhen \uff08\u63a5\u7d9a\u8a5e\uff09\u304c\u5fc5\u8981\u3002<\/li>\n<li>\u00d7\u3000<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<h1><span style=\"background-color: #008000; color: #ffffff;\">\uff12\uff10\uff12\uff15\u5e74\uff11\uff10\u6708\uff13\uff11\u65e5<\/span><\/h1>\n<p><span style=\"font-size: 18pt;\">\u82f1\u691c\u6e961\u7d1a\uff08\uff11\uff10\u6708\uff15\u65e5\u672c\u4f1a\u5834\u306b\u3066\u53d7\u9a13\uff09\u4e00\u6b21\u8a66\u9a13\u306b<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-size: 18pt;\">\u3000\u5408\u683c\u3057\u305f\u9ad8\uff11\u751f\u306e\u53d7\u691c\u76f4\u524d\u306e\u82f1\u6587\u30a8\u30c3\u30bb\u30a4\u3068\u6dfb\u524a<\/span><\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>Q6 Write an essay on the given TOPIC.<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer.<\/li>\n<li>Structure: Introduction, main body, and conclusion<\/li>\n<li>Suggested length: 120\u2013150 words<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>TOPIC<\/p>\n<p>Should a high salary be the most important thing when searching for a job?<\/p>\n<p>Points<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><u>Career opportunities<\/u><\/li>\n<li>Quality of life<\/li>\n<li>Social responsibility<\/li>\n<li>Workplace environment<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>Original)<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><u>I think a high salary should not be the most important thing when searching for a job<\/u>. (2) <u>I have two reasons<\/u>.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>(3)<u> First, looking for carrer opportunities with a high salary is difficult.<\/u> (4)<u> Thus, I think it is good to get a high salary by working hard for a long period<\/u>.\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u3000(5) <u>Second, if you choose your job only from a high salary points of view<\/u>, (6) <u>you may work with a bad workplace environment<\/u>. (7)<u> It will be reasons for quitting a job or not improving quality of life<\/u>.\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u3000(8) <u>In conclusion, regarding a high salary as the most important thing leads to some disadvatages<\/u>. (9) <u>From these reasons<\/u>, (10)<u> I belive a high salary should not be the most important thing when searghing for a job<\/u>.<\/p>\n<p>(120 words)<\/p>\n<p>Corrections)<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><u>I don\u2019t think a high salary should be the most important factor when searching for a job<\/u>. (2)<u> I have two reasons for this.<\/u><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>(3) <u>First, career opportunities with high salaries are difficult to obtain.<\/u> (4)<u> Thus, I think it is better to pursue a high salary gradually while developing your skills<\/u>.<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u3000(5) <u>Second, if you have chosen jobs only for their high salaries<\/u>, (6) <u>you may notice that you are working under bad working conditions<\/u>. (7)<u> As a result, you may end up quitting your job and having to restart your career to maintain a good quality of life<\/u>.\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u3000(8) <u>In conclusion, high-paying jobs are not always the best choice<\/u>. (9)<u> For these reasons<\/u>, (10)<u> I believe high salary jobs should not be the top choice when looking for \u00a0a job<\/u>.<\/p>\n<p>(121 words)<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>Corrections1)<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><u>I don\u2019t think a high salary should be the most important factor when searching for a job<\/u>. (2) <u>I have two reasons for this<\/u>.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>(3)<u> First, it is difficult to find career opportunities that offer high salaries<\/u>. (4) <u>Therefore, I think it is better to develop your skills first and pursue a higher salary later.<\/u><\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u3000(5)<u> Second, if you choose a job only for its high salary<\/u>, (6) <u>you may find yourself under poor workplace conditions<\/u>. (7) <u>As a result, you may end up quitting and having to restart your career in order to maintain a good quality of life.<\/u><\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u3000(8)<u> In conclusion, high-paying jobs are not always the best choice<\/u>. (9)<u> For these reasons<\/u>, (10)<u> I believe salary should not be the top priority when looking for a job<\/u>.<\/p>\n<p>(122 words)<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u7dcf\u8a55\uff09\u30b9\u30da\u30fc\u30ea\u30f3\u30b0\u30df\u30b9\u304c\u76ee\u7acb\u3061\u307e\u3059\u3002\u6587\u6cd5\u3001\u82f1\u6587\u69cb\u6210\u306f\u307b\u307c\u9069\u683c\u3067\u3001\u4e3b\u5f35\u5185\u5bb9\u306f\u7406\u89e3\u3067\u304d\u307e\u3059\u3002\u305f\u3060\u3001\u3084\u306f\u308a\u82f1\u6587\u304c\u8907\u96d1\u306a\u305f\u3081\u306b\u8aad\u307f\u624b\u304c\u660e\u78ba\u306b\u7406\u89e3\u3067\u304d\u306a\u3044\u90e8\u5206\uff08\uff18\uff09\u3084\u3001\u77ed\u304f\u51e6\u7406\u3092\u3057\u3088\u3046\u3068\u3057\u3066\u4e0d\u81ea\u7136\u306a\u82f1\u6587\uff08\uff17\uff09\u306b\u306a\u3063\u3066\u3057\u307e\u3063\u305f\u3068\u3053\u308d\u304c\u3042\u308a\u307e\u3059\u3002<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>Corrections1)\u3068Corrections)\u306f\u307b\u307c\u540c\u3058\u3067\u3059\u304c\u3001\u3088\u308a\uff11\uff09\u306e\u65b9\u304c\u30ca\u30c1\u30e5\u30e9\u30eb\u306a\u82f1\u6587\u3067\u8a9e\u5f59\u3082\u3088\u308a\u7684\u78ba\u3067\u3059\u3002<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u5168\u822c\u7684\u306b\u306f\u3001\u82f1\u691c\u6e96\uff11\u7d1a\u304c\u6c42\u3081\u308b\u30ec\u30d9\u30eb\u306b\u8fd1\u3065\u3044\u3066\u3044\u307e\u3059\u3002<\/p>\n<p>\u679c\u6562\u306b\u30c1\u30e3\u30ec\u30f3\u30b8\u3057\u3066\u4e0b\u3055\u3044\u3002<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u8a73\u7d30\uff09<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>\u25b3\u3000I think S not V\u3067\u306a\u304fI don\u2019t think SV\u3068\u3059\u308b\u3002<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>thing\u306f\u610f\u5473\u306e\u7bc4\u56f2\u304c\u5e83\u3059\u304e\u66d6\u6627\u306a\u306e\u3067factor\u304c\u660e\u78ba\u306b\u4f1d\u308f\u308b\u3002<\/p>\n<p>\uff08\uff12\uff09\u25cb\u3060\u304cfor this.\u3068\u3059\u308c\u3070\u3088\u308a\u826f\u3044\u3002<\/p>\n<p>\uff08\uff13\uff09\u25b3\u3000\u30b9\u30da\u30fc\u30ea\u30f3\u30b0career\u3002\u4e00\u822c\u8868\u73fe\u306f\u8907\u6570\u3092\u4f7f\u3046\u3002P<\/p>\n<p>\uff08\uff14\uff09\u25b3\u3000\u4e3b\u5f35\u3057\u305f\u3044\u5185\u5bb9\u3092\u3088\u308a\u5177\u4f53\u7684\u306b\u8868\u73fe\u3067\u304d\u308c\u3070\u5b8c\u74a7\u3002P<\/p>\n<p>\u3000\u3000\u3000\u4f8b\uff09\u30b9\u30ad\u30eb\u3092\u78e8\u304d\u306a\u304c\u3089\u3086\u3063\u304f\u308a\u3068\u9ad8\u7d66\u3092\u6c42\u3081\u308b\u3001\u306a\u3069\u3002<\/p>\n<p>\uff08\uff15\uff09\u25b3\u3000from a viewpoint of high salaries\u3068\u3084\u308d\u3046\u3068\u3057\u305f\u306e\uff1f\u304b\u3082\u3057\u308c\u306a\u3044\u304c\u3001<\/p>\n<p>\u3000\u3000\u3000\u30b9\u30c8\u30ec\u30fc\u30c8\u306b\u8868\u73fe\u304c\u3067\u304d\u308b\u3002P<\/p>\n<p>\uff08\uff16\uff09\u00d7\u3000\u72b6\u6cc1\u306f\u300c\u50cd\u3044\u3066\u3044\u3066\u6c17\u3065\u304f\u300d\u3060\u308d\u3046\u3002\u4f46\u3057\u3001\u6587\u610f\u306f\u7406\u89e3\u3067\u304d\u308b\u3002<\/p>\n<p>under poor(bad) working conditions\u3068\u3059\u308b\u3002poor\u304c\u3088\u308a\u9069\u5207\u3002<\/p>\n<p>\uff08\uff17\uff09\u00d7\u3000P\u3000\u3053\u3046\u3044\u3046\u82f1\u6587\u3092\u66f8\u304b\u306a\u3044\u3088\u3046\u306b\u6c17\u3092\u4ed8\u3051\u307e\u3057\u3087\u3046\u3002<\/p>\n<p>\uff08\uff18\uff09\u25b3\u3000\u30b9\u30da\u30fc\u30ea\u30f3\u30b0disadvantages \u3000\u30b7\u30f3\u30d7\u30eb\u306a\u8868\u73fe\u304c\u3067\u304d\u308bP\u3002<\/p>\n<p>\uff08\uff19\uff09\u00d7\u3000For these reasons\u304c\u5b9a\u578b\u3002\uff08\u3082\u3057\u304b\u3059\u308b\u3068\u3001From these reasons\u3068\u7d39\u4ecb\u3057\u305f\u304b\u3082\u3057\u308c\u306a\u3044\u306e\u3067\u78ba\u8a8d\u3057\u3066\u304a\u304d\u307e\u3059\u3002\uff09<\/p>\n<p>\uff08\uff11\uff10\uff09\u25b3\u3000\u30b9\u30da\u30fc\u30ea\u30f3\u30b0believe, searching\u3002\u00a0 P<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n\n\n\n\n\n<h1>\u00a0<\/h1>\n<h1><span style=\"background-color: #008000; 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(6) (7) <u>Students who depend on others well and ask for some advice from them are liked by many people.<\/u> (8) <u>Increase the people who support and advice them<\/u> (9)<u> connect\u00a0to the enhance of efficiency of their research<\/u>.<\/p>\n<p>(100 words)<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>Corrections)<\/p>\n<p><u>(<\/u>1)<u> I think communicating with others is very important<\/u>.<\/p>\n<p>(2) <u>Students want to discover new ideas and facts in their fields<\/u>, (3) <u>but if they try to study alone, they may just repeat the same patterns<\/u>.(4) <u>By discussing subjects with their peers, they can gain <\/u><u>new perspectives, gather useful information, and eventually broaden their horizons<\/u>.<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>(5) <u>Good communication skills also help build strong relationships<\/u>. (6) <u>When students trust their peers\u2019 abilities and sincerely ask for advice<\/u>, (7) <u>they themselves are likely to be seen as trustworthy<\/u>. (8)<u> As they have more peers at university, they will receive more advice<\/u>, (9)<u> thus enhancing their research skills and developing their research more efficiently and effectively<\/u>.<\/p>\n<p>(105 words)<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>Formal English Corrections)<\/p>\n<p>(1)<u> I believe that communication plays a vital role in academic and personal growth<\/u>. (2) <u>Students naturally seek to discover new ideas and facts in their fields of study<\/u>, (3) <u>but if they pursue learning in isolation, they risk falling into repetitive patterns.<\/u> (4) <u>By engaging in discussion with their peers, however, they can gain fresh perspectives, exchange useful information, and ultimately broaden their horizons.<\/u><\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>(5) <u>Furthermore, strong communication skills foster meaningful relationships<\/u>. (6) <u>When students place trust in their peers\u2019 abilities and sincerely seek advice<\/u>, (7) <u>they not only benefit from valuable insights but also become regarded as reliable themselves<\/u>. (8) <u>As their network of peers expands at university<\/u>, (8)\u2019 <u>they will be able to receive diverse advice<\/u>, (9) <u>thereby enhancing their research skills and advancing their studies more efficiently and productively<\/u><\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u56de\u7b54\u4f8b\uff08PDF\u30d5\u30a1\u30a4\u30eb\uff09:<a href=\"https:\/\/www.bba.la\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/09\/a4d48c848c8ae6567e892496e40ceb95.pdf\">\u4eac\u5927<\/a><\/p>\n<h1><span style=\"color: #ffffff; background-color: #008000;\">\uff12\uff10\uff12\uff15\u5e74\uff17\u6708\uff11\uff12\u65e5<\/span><\/h1>\n<p><strong><span style=\"font-size: 24pt;\">\u9ad8\uff11\u304c\u521d\u3081\u3066\u66f8\u3044\u305f\u82f1\u691c\u6e96\uff11\u7d1a\u30a8\u30c3\u30bb\u30a4\u3068\u6dfb\u524a\u4f8b<\/span><\/strong><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>Write an essay on the given TOPIC.<br \/>\u25cf Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer.<br \/>\u25cf Structure: Introduction, main body, and conclusion<br \/>\u25cf Suggested length: 120\u2013150 words<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>TOPIC<br \/>Agree or disagree:<br \/>Movies and TV programs have more negative influence than positive on how young people behave.<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>Cost<br \/>\u25cf Society<br \/>\u25cf Entertainment<br \/>\u25cf Culture<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>Original)<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><u>I think that TV programs and movies have more positive influence than negative.<\/u> (2)<u> There are two main reasons for this<\/u>.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>(3)<u> First, people can learn about the problems like environmental issues or political situation from some TV programs or movies<\/u>. (4) <u>By understanding these topics<\/u>, (5) <u>people are able to think and have their own idea about these subjects<\/u>.<\/p>\n<p>(6)<u> Second, TV programs and movies are good for people&#8217;s mental health<\/u>. (7) <u>Some of these make people laugh and feel them happy<\/u>. (8) <u>Also, you are less stressful after movies or TV programs than before<\/u>.<\/p>\n<p>(9) <u>In cncluison, TV programs and movies have a great positive effect.<\/u> (10) <u>They give opportunities to think about the problems and also they can make people fun<\/u>.<\/p>\n<p>(11) <u>Therefore I think it is good for young people to see movies or TV programs.<\/u><\/p>\n<p>(130words)<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>Corrections)<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><u>I agree that movies and TV programs have a more positive influence than a negative influence<\/u>. (2)<u> There are two main reasons for this<\/u>.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>(3) <u>First, young people can learn about many issues, such as environmental and political problems<\/u>. (4)<u> By learning about these important topics<\/u>, (5)<u> they begin to think more and develop their own ideas about today\u2019s<strong> society<\/strong><\/u>.<\/p>\n<p>(6) <u>Second, watching movies and TV programs is good for mental health<\/u>. (7) <u>These kinds of <strong>entertainment<\/strong> can make young people laugh or feel happy<\/u>, (8) <u>and reduce daily stress<\/u>.<\/p>\n<p>(9)<u> In conclusion, movies and TV programs can have a very positive effect<\/u>. (10) <u>They can provide opportunities to think more deeply and make young people feel happier<\/u>.<\/p>\n<p>(11) <u>Therefore, I believe it is good for young people to watch TV programs and movies.<\/u> (121 words)<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u7dcf\u8a55\uff09<\/p>\n<p>\u30fb\u82f1\u691c\u6e961\u7d1a\u30a8\u30c3\u30bb\u30fc\u3092\u59cb\u3081\u3066\u66f8\u304d\u307e\u3057\u305f\u304c\u3001\u521d\u5fc3\u8005\u3068\u3057\u3066\u306f\u826f\u304f\u66f8\u3051\u3066\u3044\u307e\u3059\u3002(1)(2)Introduction (3)-(8)Two reasons (9)(10)Final opinion 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as<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0 \u30fbenvironmental issues or political situation\u3000\u30b7\u30f3\u30d7\u30eb\u306b\u3059\u308bP<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>\u25b3\u3000learning\u304c\u3088\u308a\u9069\u3059\u308bP<\/li>\n<li>\u00d7\u3000\u30fb(young)people\u3060\u304b\u3089they<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>\u30fb\u5b66\u3079\u3070\u3088\u308a\u8003\u3048\u305d\u3057\u3066(these subjects)\u2190\u3053\u3053\u3067society\u3092\u4f7f\u3048\u3070\uff1fP<\/p>\n<p>\u30fbideas\u3092\u767a\u5c55\u3055\u305b\u308b\uff08\u6df1\u3081\u308b\uff09\u306e\u3067develop\u304c\u6700\u9069\u3002<\/p>\n<p>(6)\u25b3\u3000 \u30fbWatching\uff5e\u304c\u3088\u308a\u9069\u3059\u308b<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0 \u30fbpeople\u2019s \u306f\u306a\u304f\u3068\u3082\u826f\u304f\u30b7\u30f3\u30d7\u30eb\u3067\u8aad\u307f\u3084\u3059\u3044\u3002P<\/p>\n<p>(7)\u00d7\u3000\u30fb\u3053\u3053\u3067entertainment 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I have experience that it encouraged me, so this time I want to encourage someone<\/u>. (2) <u>Also, I like feeling thrill by watching it. Through the movie, I want to tell people that it is important to challenge new things without fear of failure. In the movie, people face many difficulties, but they cooperate each other and finally overcome them<\/u>.\u00a0 (3) <u>Watching adventure movies will help people have confidence themselves and raise their motivation. Furthermore, they can realize the importance of\u00a0friends.\u00a0<\/u><\/p>\n<p><u>These things will connect their minds and lives<\/u>.\u00a0(95words)<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>Corrections)<\/p>\n<p>(1)<u> I want to create an adventure movie because I was once encouraged by one, and if I had the chance, I\u2019d like to inspire others in the same way. <\/u><\/p>\n<p>(2)<u> I also like the feeling of excitement and thrill when watching these films. I want to show people that it\u2019s important to embrace new things without fearing failure. In my movie, the characters will face difficulties and finally overcome them through cooperation<\/u>.<\/p>\n<p>(3) <u>Adventure movies will help the audience have confidence and motivation, ultimately showing them the importance of\u00a0friendship.\u00a0This will shape their mindset for life<\/u>. (95 words)<\/p>\n<p>Corrections1)<\/p>\n<p>(1) Since I remember being encouraged by an adventure film, if I were a director, I\u2019d like to create films of the same genre to inspire others. \u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>(2) \u00a0I also want my audience to experience the excitement of overcoming difficulties through films and understand the importance of facing fear and failure, challenging themselves, and cooperating with others.<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>(3) These movies will help people build confidence and motivation when facing new challenges, realize the importance of\u00a0friendship, and ultimately shape their outlook on life. (80 words)<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>Corrections2)<\/p>\n<p>(1) Since I remember being encouraged by an adventure film, if I were a director, I would like to create films of the same genre to inspire others. \u00a0\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>(2) Overcoming difficulties through films is also an exciting experience. Through my movies, I want to show my audience the importance of facing fears, embracing failure, and challenging themselves while cooperating with others.<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>(3) These films will help people build confidence and motivation to take on new challenges. They will also highlight the value of friendship, shaping viewer\u2019s\u2019 mindsets and perspectives on life. (88words)<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u7dcf\u8a55\uff09\u4e3b\u5f35\u5185\u5bb9\u306f\u7406\u89e3\u304c\u3067\u304d\u307e\u3059\u3002\u6587\u6cd5\u3084\u8a9e\u6cd5\u3082\u5927\u304d\u306a\u30df\u30b9\u306f\u3042\u308a\u307e\u305b\u3093\u3002\u3088\u308a\u660e\u78ba\u3001\u3088\u308a\u30b7\u30f3\u30d7\u30eb\u306a\u8868\u73fe\u3001\u3064\u307e\u308a\u30ca\u30c1\u30e5\u30e9\u30eb\u306a\u8868\u73fe\u3092\u3059\u308b\u306b\u306f\u3069\u3046\u3059\u308b\u304b\u3092\u793a\u3057\u307e\u3057\u305f\u3002Corrections)\u306f\u5143\u6587\u306b\u306a\u308b\u3079\u304f\u5fe0\u5b9f\u306b\u76f4\u3057\u307e\u3057\u305f\u304c\u3001\u63a5\u7d9a\u8a5e\u3084\u5206\u8a5e\u69cb\u6587\u4f7f\u7528\u3067\u3088\u308a\u307e\u3068\u3081\u307e\u3057\u305f\u3002Corrections 1,2) \u306f\u8a9e\u6cd5\u3084\u8868\u73fe\u306e\u4ed5\u65b9\u3092\u5909\u3048\u3066\u540c\u4e3b\u5f35\u5185\u5bb9\u3092\u66f8\u304d\u63db\u3048\u307e\u3057\u305f\u3002\u7d0d\u5f97\u3057\u3084\u3059\u3044\uff11\u304b\uff12\u3092\u4f8b\u6587\u3068\u3057\u3066\u4e0b\u3055\u3044\u3002<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u8a73\u7d30\uff09<\/p>\n<p>\u4e3b\u5f35\u5185\u5bb9\u3092\uff13\u3064\u306e\u307e\u3068\u307e\u308a\u306b\u5206\u3051\u307e\u3057\u305f\u3002<\/p>\n<p>(1)\u25b3\u3000make\u2192 create, an adventure movie\u2192 one, encourage\u2192 inspire<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0 \u201cI have experience\u201d\u306f\u306a\u304f\u3068\u3082\u540c\u610f\uff08\u30b7\u30f3\u30d7\u30eb\u306b\u3067\u304d\u308b\uff09<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0 encourage\u3068 inspire\u306f\u307b\u307c\u540c\u610f\u3002\u7e70\u308a\u8fd4\u3057\u3092\u907f\u3051\u308b\u3002<\/p>\n<p>(2)\u25b3\u3000feeling thrill\u2192 the feeling of thrill and excitement\u00a0 \u306e\u65b9\u304c\u3088\u308a\u660e\u78ba\u3002<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0 watching it\u2192 these movies\/films\uff08\u4e00\u822c\u8868\u73fe\uff09<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0 tell\u2192 show, embrace new things \/ challenge themselves\u304c\u3088\u308a\u660e\u78ba\u3002<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0 without fear of failure\u2192 without fearing failure<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0 in the movie, people \u2192 in my movie, the characters(\u767b\u5834\u4eba\u7269)\u304c\u660e\u89e3\u3002<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0 will face ~\u4ee5\u4e0b\u306e\u82f1\u6587\u69cb\u6210\u306f\u4fee\u6b63\u6587\u306e\u901a\u308a\u3002<\/p>\n<p>(3)\u25b3\u3000\u7121\u99c4\u8a9e\u304c\u3044\u304f\u3064\u304b\u3042\u308b\u3002watching, themselves, raise\u306a\u3069\u4e0d\u8981\u3002<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0 people\u2192the audience \u3000\u305d\u306e\u4ed6\u4f8b\u6587\u53c2\u3002<\/p>\n<h1>\u00a0<\/h1>\n<h1><span style=\"color: #ffffff; background-color: #008000;\">\uff12\uff10\uff12\uff14\u5e74\uff16\u6708\uff12\uff19\u65e5\u00a0<\/span><\/h1>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p><strong><span style=\"font-size: 24pt;\">\u9ad8\uff13\u306b\u3088\u308b\u82f1\u4f5c\u6587\u306e\u89e3\u7b54\u3068\u6dfb\u524a\u4f8b<\/span><\/strong><\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u73fe\u4ee3\u306f\u73fe\u91d1\u3092\u307b\u3068\u3093\u3069\u4f7f\u308f\u305a\u30af\u30ec\u30b8\u30c3\u30c8\u30ab\u30fc\u30c9\u3084\u96fb\u5b50\u30de\u30cd\u30fc\u3067\u6c7a\u6e08\u304c\u3067\u304d\u308b\u30ad\u30e3\u30c3\u30b7\u30e5\u30ec\u30b9\u793e\u4f1a\u306b\u306a\u308a\u3064\u3064\u3042\u308a\u307e\u3059\u3002\u3053\u3046\u3057\u305f\u793e\u4f1a\u306b\u306f\u3069\u306e\u3088\u3046\u306a\u5229\u70b9\u3001\u3042\u308b\u3044\u306f\u554f\u984c\u70b9\u304c\u3042\u308b\u3068\u601d\u3044\u307e\u3059\u304b\uff1f<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>Original)<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><u>I can come up with two good aspects for it.<\/u><\/li>\n<li><u>Firstly, thanks to becoming the cashless society,<\/u> (3) <u>you do not have to bring no cash with you in your daily life<\/u>. (3)\u2019<\/li>\n<li><u>Secondly, when you do shopping at the store,<\/u> (5)<u> you will finish quickly paying the check,<\/u> (6)<u> so you need not spend waste time waiting the checkout<\/u>.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>(7) <u>Therefore, you can lead a comfortable life<\/u>. \u3000\u3000(63\u8a9e)<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u7dcf\u8a55\uff09\u7121\u99c4\u306a\u8a9e\u3084\u7e70\u308a\u8fd4\u3057\u304c\u3042\u308b\u3002\u5177\u4f53\u4f8b\u304c\u306a\u304f\u8aac\u5f97\u529b\u306b\u6b20\u3051\u308b\u3002<\/p>\n<p>\u8a73\u7d30\uff09Corrections(1)\u3067\u8aa4\u308a\u3092\u6b63\u3057\u3001\u5fc5\u8981\u306a\u6587\u3092\u52a0\u3048\u3066\u3042\u308a\u307e\u3059\u3002\uff08\uff12\uff09\u306f\u66f8\u304d\u63db\u3048\u3067\u3059\u3002\u3000<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>\u25b3 two aspects \u3067\u3059\u304c\u3001\uff08\uff13\uff09\u306e\u5177\u4f53\u4f8b\u304c\uff08\uff14\uff09\uff08\uff15\uff09\uff08\uff16\uff09\u3067\u3059\u3002Two aspects\u3092\u8a18\u8ff0\u3059\u308b\u306a\u3089\u3001\u7570\u306a\u308b\u5177\u4f53\u4f8b\u3092Firstly, Secondly\u305d\u308c\u305e\u308c\u306b\u52a0\u3048\u308b\u3068\u826f\u3044\u3067\u3057\u3087\u3046\u3002\u4ee5\u4e0b\u306b\u8aac\u660e\u3057\u3066\u3044\u304d\u307e\u3059\u3002<\/li>\n<li>\u2715\u3000\u8907\u96d1\u3002Thanks to cashless society\u3067\u5341\u5206\u3002<\/li>\n<li>\u2715 \u3000no \u4e0d\u8981\u3002do not need to have\u3002<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>(3)\u2019 \u3053\u3053\u306b(4)\u4ee5\u4e0b\u3068\u7570\u306a\u308b\u5177\u4f53\u4f8b\u304c\u306a\u3044\u3068two aspects \u304c\u5fc5\u8981\u3067\u306a\u3044\u3068\u601d\u3044\u307e\u3059\u3002\u306a\u305c\u306a\u3089\uff08\uff14\uff09\u4ee5\u4e0b\u304c\u3001\uff08\uff13\uff09\u306e\u5177\u4f53\u4f8b\u3068\u306a\u3063\u3066\u3044\u307e\u3059\u304b\u3089\u3002\u3060\u304b\u3089\u3001\uff08\uff13\uff09\u2018\u3092\u66f8\u304b\u306a\u3044\u306a\u3089\u3001\u7121\u7406\u306bFirstly, Secondly\u3068\u5206\u3051\u308b\u5fc5\u8981\u306f\u306a\u304f\u3001\u5177\u4f53\u4f8b\u3092\u8a73\u3057\u304f\u66f8\u3051\u3070\u826f\u3044\u3068\u601d\u3044\u307e\u3059\u3002<\/p>\n<p>Corrections(2)\u306b\u4e8c\u3064\u306b\u5206\u3051\u305f\u5834\u5408\u306e\u4f8b\u6587\u3092\u66f8\u304d\u307e\u3057\u305f\u3002<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>\u25b3\u3000do the shopping at a store \u3068\u306a\u308b\u3002\u5206\u8a5e\u69cb\u6587\u304c\u53ef\u80fd\u3002<\/li>\n<li>\u25b3\u3000can quickly finish paying\uff5e\u3055\u3089\u306b\u60c5\u5831\u304c\u6b32\u3057\u3044\u3002P<\/li>\n<li>\u25b3\u3000waste time = waiting \u3060\u304b\u3089\u30b7\u30f3\u30d7\u30eb\u306b\u3002P<\/li>\n<li>\u2715\u3000lead \u3067\u306a\u304fhave\u3002\u3000P<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\uff17\uff10\u8a9e\u7a0b\u5ea6\u306a\u3089\u3001Corrections2 \u306e\u3088\u3046\u306b\u3001\uff08\uff11\uff09general\u00a0 (2)~(6)\u5177\u4f53\u4f8b\u3000(7)\u7d50\u8ad6<\/p>\n<p>\u304c\u30b7\u30f3\u30d7\u30eb\u3067\u826f\u3044\u3002<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>Corrections1)<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><u>I can come up with two good aspects for it<\/u>.<\/li>\n<li><u>Firstly, in a cashless society<\/u>, (3) <u>you do not need to have cash with you in your daily life<\/u>. \uff083)\u2019<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>(4) <u>Secondly, when shopping at a store<\/u>, (5) <u>since you can quickly pay with a credit card, or with electronic money<\/u>, (6) <u>you need not spend waste time at a checkout.<\/u><\/p>\n<p>(7)<u> Therefore, you can have a comfortable life with cashless payment methods<\/u>.<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>Corrections2)<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><u>There is a beneficial respect for it.<\/u><\/li>\n<li><u>In a cashless society<\/u>, (3)<u> it is not necessary to carry cash in daily life.<\/u><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>(3)\u2019<u>This convenience extends to everyday activities, such as catching a usual train to school every morning.<\/u> (4)(5)(6) <u>Also, quick shopping will be possible<\/u>, (<u>and eventually it will lead to a more comfortable life \/ ultimately leading to a more comfortable life<\/u>).<\/p>\n<p>(7) <u>Thus, you can enjoy a happy life along with the convenience of cashless payment options<\/u>. (65words~68words)<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n\n\n<h1><span style=\"color: #ffffff; background-color: #008000;\">\u30002023\u5e74\uff13\u670825\u65e5\u30002022\u5e74\u5ea6\u3000<\/span><\/h1>\n<p>\u3053\u3053\u3067\u306f\u3001\u82f1\u4f5c\u6587\u6307\u5c0e\u306b\u3088\u308b\u89e3\u7b54\u3068\u6dfb\u524a\u4f8b\u3092\u9806\u6b21\u3001\u52a0\u3048\u3066\u3044\u304d\u307e\u3059\u3002<\/p>\n<p>\u6642\u3005\u3001\u53d7\u9a13\u751f\u306f\u3054\u89a7\u4e0b\u3055\u3044\u3002<\/p>\n<p>\u554f\u984c1\u3000\u5927\u962a\u5927\u5b66\u5916\u56fd\u8a9e\u5b66\u90e8\u30002017<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>\u307e\u305f\u3001\u305d\u306e\u8da3\u5473\u3092\u9014\u4e2d\u3067\u6295\u3052\u51fa\u3057\u3066\u3057\u307e\u308f\u306a\u3044\u30b3\u30c4\u306b\u306a\u308b\u306e\u3067\u306a\u3044\u3060\u308d\u3046\u304b\u3002\u5b50\u4f9b\u306e\u3053\u308d\u3001\u3060\u308c\u3067\u3082\u3001\u6642\u3092\u5fd8\u308c\u308b\u307b\u3069\u5922\u4e2d\u306b\u306a\u3063\u305f\u3082\u306e\u304c\u3042\u308b\u3060\u308d\u3046\u3002\u4eca\u66f4\u306a\u3069\u3068\u601d\u308f\u305a\u306b\u3001\u3042\u306e\u6642\u306e\u5fc3\u306e\u3068\u304d\u3081\u304d\u3092\u601d\u3044\u51fa\u3057\u3066\u307f\u3088\u3046\u3002<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>\u89e3\u7b54)\u3000\u6771\u5927\u5408\u683c\u9ad83\u306e\u89e3\u7b54<\/p>\n<p>Also, it would be the key to continue to (1)<u> do the hobby<\/u> (2)<u> for a long time<\/u>. When we were children, we all would have had what we could (3) <u>indulge in<\/u> without thinking of time passing. Let&#8217;s remember our excitement of those days without thinking it is too late.<\/p>\n<p>\u6dfb\u524a\u3068\u8a55\u4fa1) (1) \u25b3\u3000hobbies (2) \u3007\u3000(3)\u3000\u3007<\/p>\n<p>Also, it would be the key to continue to (1)<u> (do \/ engage in) (our\/ the) hobbies<\/u> (2<u>) (without interruption \/ for a long time)<\/u>. When we were children, we all would have had what we could (3) <u>(indulge in \/ were obsessed with)<\/u> without thinking of time passing. Let&#8217;s remember our excitement of those days without thinking it is too late.<\/p>\n<p>Original)\u3000\u795e\u6238\u5927\u5b66\u5408\u683c\u9ad83\u306e\u89e3\u7b54<\/p>\n<p>Also, this may (1) <u>become<\/u> a trick (2) <u>of not giving up on the hobbies halfway<\/u>. Probably, we (3)<u> were<\/u> all (4) <u>absorbed<\/u> in something, (5)<u> forgetting the time<\/u>, when we were children. Let\u2019s (6) (remember excitement, we felt at that time,) without thinking it\u2019s too late.<\/p>\n<p>Corrections) (1) \u25b3\u3000(2)\u3000\u3007\u3000(3)\u3000\u3007\u3000(4)\u3000\u3007\u3000(5)\u3000\u25b3\u3000(6) \u25b3\u3000\u30ab\u30f3\u30de\u4e0d\u8981<\/p>\n<p>Also, this may (1)<u> be<\/u> a trick (2) <u>to ensure consistency in our hobbies<\/u>. Probably, we (3)<u> used to be<\/u> all (4) <u>engrossed<\/u> in something, (5)<u> without noticing time passing<\/u>, when we were children. Let\u2019s (6)<u> relive those good all times<\/u>, without thinking it\u2019s too late.<\/p>\n<h1><span style=\"background-color: #008000; color: #ffffff;\">\u00a02022\u5e74 2\u670815\u65e5\u00a0 \u30002021\u5e74\u5ea6\u00a0\u00a0<\/span><\/h1>\n<p>\u2606\u795e\u6238\u5927\u5b66\u3000\u82f1\u4f5c\u6587\u904e\u53bb\u554f\u306e\u6dfb\u524a\u3068\u30d1\u30e9\u30d5\u30ec\u30fc\u30ba\uff08\u66f8\u304d\u63db\u3048\uff09\u3092\u7d39\u4ecb\u3057\u307e\u3059\u3002<\/p>\n<p>\u795e\u6238\u5927(2)-2<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>Original)<\/li>\n<li><u>I think that the sentence does not make sence<\/u>. (2)<u> I think that decline in the number of student studying abroad is due to dream of solving Japanese problem<\/u>. (3)<u> If we want to solve problem<\/u>, (4)<u> we have to learn about it<\/u>. (5) <u>Now, there is problem of increasing elderly people in Japan,<\/u> (6)<u> we can hear real voice of elderly people<\/u>. (7) <u>So, Japanese people don\u2019t study abroad<\/u>. (64words)<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>\u3000<strong>\u30fb<\/strong>Corrections)<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><u>I think that this is not true<\/u>. (2) <u>The decline in the number of students studying abroad could be due to their intentions of solving Japanese problems<\/u>. (3)<u> If so<\/u>, (4)<u> they should stay here to directly know better<\/u>. (5) <u>For instance, as they can find an issue about the increase of elderly population<\/u>, (6) <u>they\u2019ll likely have more information from their real voices<\/u>. (7)<u> Thus, young people won\u2019t study abroad<\/u>. (65words)<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>\u8a55\u4fa1\uff09\u4e3b\u5f35\u5185\u5bb9\u306f\u7406\u89e3\u3067\u304d\u307e\u3059\u304c\u3001\u8868\u73fe\u306e\u4ed5\u65b9\u3001\u8a9e\u6cd5\u3001\u4e3b\u8a9e\u306e\u4e00\u8cab\u6027\u3001\u5358\u6570\u8907\u6570\u306e\u533a\u5225\u3001\u305d\u3057\u3066\u82f1\u6587\u69cb\u6210\u304c\u3067\u304d\u308c\u3070\u3001\u30af\u30ea\u30a2\u3067\u5f37\u3044\u4e3b\u5f35\u304c\u3067\u304d\u308b\u3068\u601d\u3044\u307e\u3059\u3002\u5404\u6587\u3092P\uff08\u66f8\u304d\u76f4\u3057\uff09\u3057\u3066\u3042\u308a\u307e\u3059\u306e\u3067\u53c2\u8003\u306b\u3057\u3066\u4e0b\u3055\u3044\u3002<\/p>\n<p>\u203b\u3064\u3065\u308a\u304c\u96d1\u3067\u8aa4\u89e3\u3055\u308c\u308b\u53ef\u80fd\u6027\u304c\u3042\u308a\u307e\u3059\u3002\u8981\u6ce8\u610f\uff01<\/p>\n<p>\u8a73\u7d30\uff09<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>\u25b3\u3000\u3000this doesn\u2019t make sense<\/li>\n<li>\u25b3\u3000\u3000the decline, students, their dreams, problems \u3068\u306a\u308b\u3068\u3053\u308d\u3002<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0 \u4e3b\u5f35\u5185\u5bb9\u306f\u7406\u89e3\u3067\u304d\u308b\u306e\u3067\u25b3\u3067\u3059\u304c\u63a1\u70b9\u57fa\u6e96\u6b21\u7b2c\u3067\u306f\u52a0\u70b9\u306a\u3057\u304b\u3082\u3002<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0 I think~ \u4e0d\u8981\u3000\u306a\u308b\u3079\u304f\u4f7f\u7528\u3057\u306a\u3044\u3002\u307e\u3057\u3066\u9023\u7d9a\u3057\u3066\u306f\u907f\u3051\u308b\u3002<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>\u25b3\u3000\u3000students\u306e\u8a71\u3092\u3057\u3066\u3044\u308b\u306e\u3067they\u3067\u4e00\u8cab\u3059\u308b\u65b9\u304c\u826f\u3044\u3002<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>\u6700\u521d\u304b\u3089we\u306a\u3089\u305d\u308c\u3067\u3082\u53ef\u80fd\u3060\u304c\u3002\u3000\u7121\u99c4\u306a\u7e70\u308a\u8fd4\u3057\u3067\u3059, If so \u3067\u53ef<\/p>\n<p>problem \u2192\u3000them<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>\u25b3\u3000\u3000\u8868\u73fe\u5185\u5bb9\u306f\u7406\u89e3\u3067\u304d\u307e\u3059\u304c\u8aac\u660e\u304c\u8db3\u308a\u307e\u305b\u3093\u3002<\/li>\n<li>\u00d7\u3000\u3000\u3053\u3053\u3067\u306eproblem\u306f\u3000the problem of~\u3068\u9650\u5b9a\u306a\u306e\u3067\u8981the\u3001\u6545\u306bthere is\u69cb\u6587\u306f\u4e0d\u53ef\u3002 \u00a0increasing~\u2192the decrease of ~\u3002<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>people\u3088\u308apopulation<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>\u25b3\u3000\u3000\u4e00\u822c\u8868\u73fe\u306f\u8907\u6570\u5f62\u3067\u3068\u3044\u3046\u9244\u5247\u3092\u3002real voices<\/li>\n<li>\u25b3\u3000\u3000Japanese people\u2192Japanese students, young people\u3067\u3057\u3087\u3046\u3002<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>2022\u5e74\uff11\u670813\u65e5\u516c\u958b<\/p>\n<p>\u2606\u3000\u73fe\u5728\u958b\u8b1b\u4e2d\u306e\u9ad8\uff12\uff08\u65b0\u9ad8\uff13\uff09\u82f1\u4f5c\u6587\u6388\u696d\u306e\u751f\u5f92\u306e\u89e3\u7b54\u3068\u6dfb\u524a\u3092\u7d39\u4ecb\u3057\u307e\u3059\u3002<\/p>\n<p>\u6388\u696d\u4e2d\u306b\u3069\u3053\u3092\u3069\u3046\u76f4\u3059\u3079\u304d\u306a\u306e\u304b\u3092\u89e3\u8aac\u3057\u3066\u3044\u307e\u3059\u3002<\/p>\n<p>\u554f\u984c\uff11\uff09\u4f55\u306b\u3088\u3089\u305a\u3001\u3053\u308c\u307e\u3067\u306b\u3067\u304d\u306a\u3044\u3068\u601d\u3063\u3066\u3044\u305f\u3053\u3068\u304c\u4f55\u304b\u306e\u62cd\u5b50\u306b\u7a81\u7136\u3067\u304d\u308b\u3088\u3046\u306b\u306a\u3063\u305f\u308a\u3001\u3053\u308c\u307e\u3067\u3088\u304f\u5206\u304b\u3089\u305a\u306b\u3082\u3084\u3082\u3084\u3057\u3066\u3044\u305f\u3082\u306e\u304c\u7a81\u7136\u7406\u89e3\u3067\u304d\u305f\u308a\u3059\u308b\u306e\u306f\u3001\u4eba\u751f\u306b\u304a\u3051\u308b\u5927\u3044\u306a\u308b\u559c\u3073\u306e\u4e00\u3064\u3060\u3068\u601d\u3046\u3002\u305d\u3046\u3044\u3046\u6642\u306f\u3042\u305f\u304b\u3082\u76ee\u306e\u524d\u306e\u4e0d\u900f\u660e\u306a\u30f4\u30a7\u30fc\u30eb\u304c\u4e00\u679a\u3059\u3063\u3068\u306f\u304c\u308c\u305f\u3088\u3046\u306a\u6c17\u304c\u3059\u308b\u306e\u3067\u3042\u308b\u3002<\/p>\n<p>\u89e3\u7b54)<\/p>\n<p>Sometimes (0), .(1) <u>in various situations, <\/u>we unexpectedly find that we are able to do (2)<u> a certain thing which<\/u> (3)<u> we have not believed we can do <\/u>(4<u>), or suddenly understand<\/u> (5) <u>what has seemed<\/u> really (6)<u> complicated<\/u> (7) <u>until that time<\/u>. (8<u>) We may have one of the greatest moments of life at such times<\/u>, (9) <u>when we feel<\/u> as if (10) <u>opaque vail<\/u> (11) <u>is lifted<\/u> from our eyes.<\/p>\n<p>\u6dfb\u524a\u3068\u8a55\u4fa1) (0)\u00d7(1)\u3007(2)\u25b3(3)\u25b3(4)\u25b3(5)\u00d7(6)\u3007(7)\u00d7(8)\u25b3(9)\u3007(10)\u00d7(11)\u25b3<\/p>\n<p>Sometimes, (1<u>) there are various situations, in which<\/u> we unexpectedly find that we are able to do (2) <u>something (that)<\/u> (3) <u>we believed we couldn\u2019t do<\/u>, (4) o<u>r suddenly reach understanding about<\/u> (5) <u>what had seemed<\/u> really (6) <u>complicated and vague<\/u> (7) <u>until now<\/u>. (8)<u> I think this is one of the greatest moments in our lives<\/u>, (9)<u> feeling<\/u> as if (10)<u> an opaque veil<\/u> (11) <u>has been lifted<\/u> from our eyes.<\/p>\n<p>\u554f\u984c\uff12\uff09\u672c\u304c\u5206\u304b\u308a\u306b\u304f\u3044\u3068\u304d\u3001\u305d\u308c\u304c\u672c\u306e\u305b\u3044\u3067\u306f\u306a\u304f\u3001\u8aad\u8005\u306e\u65b9\u304c\u672a\u719f\u3067\u3042\u308b\u305f\u3081\u306e\u3053\u3068\u304c\u306a\u3044\u3067\u306f\u306a\u3044\u3002\u3053\u3046\u3044\u3046\u5834\u5408\u306b\u306f\u3001\u8aad\u8005\u81ea\u8eab\u306e\u6210\u9577\u3059\u308b\u65e5\u3092\u5f85\u3064\u3088\u308a\u307b\u304b\u306b\u624b\u304c\u306a\u3044\u3067\u3042\u308d\u3046\u3002\u540c\u3058\u672c\u3092\u5e74\u6708\u3092\u7d4c\u3066\u304b\u3089\u8aad\u307f\u901a\u3057\u3066\u307f\u308b\u3068\u3001\u3088\u304f\u308f\u304b\u3063\u3066\u9762\u767d\u304b\u3063\u305f\u3068\u3044\u3046\u7d4c\u9a13\u3092\u6301\u3064\u4eba\u306f\u5c11\u306a\u304f\u306a\u3044\u3068\u601d\u308f\u308c\u308b\u3002<\/p>\n<p>\u89e3\u7b54)<\/p>\n<p>When books are too difficult for readers (1) <u>to understand,<\/u> (2)<u> this is not sometimes (<\/u>3)<u> due to<\/u> the books, but lack of their (4) <u>abilities<\/u>. (5)<u> In this case,<\/u> (6) t<u>hey can only wait <\/u>for the day, (7)<u> when they develop abilities to understand the ones<\/u>. Not a few people seem to have (8<u>) had experiences of being able to understand the ones,<\/u> and (9)<u> finding the ones interesting<\/u>, when (10) <u>they read through the same ones several years later.<\/u><\/p>\n<p>\u6dfb\u524a\u3068\u8a55\u4fa1)(1)\u3007(2)\u25b3(3)\u25b3(4)\u3007(5)\u3007(6)\u25b3(7)\u25b3(8)\u25b3 the experience of (9)\u25b3feel them (10)\u3007<\/p>\n<p>When books are too difficult for readers (1<u>) to very well understand<\/u>, (2)<u> this could be, sometimes,<\/u> (3) <u>not due to<\/u> the books, but the lack of their (4<u>) reading abilities<\/u>. (5) <u>When they face these matters<\/u>, (6)<u> they will likely have nothing to do but wait<\/u> for the day, (7) <u>when their reading powers develop and let them understand<\/u>. Not a few people seem to have (8) <u>experienced being able to easily read,<\/u> and (9) <u>feel interested in the same books<\/u>, when (10) <u>rereading through them several years later<\/u>.<\/p>\n<p>\u554f\u984c\uff13\uff09\u6700\u8fd1\u306f\u3042\u3089\u3086\u308b\u3082\u306e\u304c\u81ea\u52d5\u8ca9\u58f2\u6a5f\u3067\u8cb7\u3048\u308b\u3088\u3046\u306b\u306a\u3063\u305f\u3002\u300c\u3053\u308c\u304f\u3060\u3055\u3044\u300d\u3068\u304b\u300c\u3044\u304f\u3089\u3067\u3059\u304b\u300d\u3068\u5e97\u54e1\u306b\u3044\u3046\u5fc5\u8981\u3082\u306a\u304f\u306a\u3063\u305f\u3002\u8cb7\u3044\u3082\u306e\u3082\u305f\u3044\u3066\u3044\u30b9\u30fc\u30d1\u30fc\u3067\u9593\u306b\u5408\u3046\u3002\u597d\u304d\u306a\u3082\u306e\u3092\u304b\u3054\u306b\u5165\u308c\u3066\u30ec\u30b8\u3067\u9ed9\u3063\u3066\u6255\u3046\u3002\u3072\u3068\u308a\u66ae\u3089\u3057\u306e\u4eba\u306a\u3069\u3001\u591c\u3001\u5bdd\u3088\u3046\u3068\u3057\u3066\u3075\u3068\u8003\u3048\u3066\u307f\u308b\u3068\u3001\u4e00\u65e5\u4e2d\u8ab0\u3068\u3082\u53e3\u3092\u304d\u304b\u306a\u304b\u3063\u305f\u3053\u3068\u306b\u6c17\u304c\u3064\u304d\u3001\u7528\u3082\u306a\u3044\u306e\u306b\u53cb\u9054\u3068\u96fb\u8a71\u3059\u308b\u3053\u3068\u3082\u73cd\u3057\u304f\u306a\u3044\u3002\u307e\u3055\u306b\u7121\u58f0\u751f\u6d3b\u306e\u6642\u4ee3\u3067\u3042\u308b\u3002<\/p>\n<p>\u89e3\u7b54)<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0Today, we can buy anything with vending machine. Now we needn\u2019t to say (1) (2) <u>\u201cI\u2019ll take this.\u201d, or \u201cHow much is it?\u201d<\/u> (3)<u> Usually, supermarket will do shopping.<\/u> (4)<u> Take things what we want into basket and pay money at register without say something<\/u>. (5) <u>Those who live by oneself often notice that he talked with no one that day before fell asleep, and phone to friend<\/u>. (6) <u>Exactly, it is silent age now. <\/u>\u00a0\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u6dfb\u524a\u3068\u8a55\u4fa1) (1)\u00d7(2)\u25b3(, ? .) (3)\u00d7(4)\u00d7(5)\u00d7(6)\u25b3<\/p>\n<p>Today, we can buy anything with vending machines. Now we needn\u2019t say (1) <u>to sales people<\/u>,<u> these phrases<\/u>, (2) <u>like \u201cI\u2019ll take this,\u201d or \u201cHow much is it?\u201d<\/u> (3)<u> As supermarkets will usually have almost all kinds of necessities, we have only to go shopping there.<\/u> (4)<u> We can find all things that we want to buy, put them into baskets, and pay money at a register without saying any words.<\/u><\/p>\n<p>\u4eac\u5927\u3001\u962a\u5927\u306a\u3069\u30c8\u30c3\u30d7\u56fd\u7acb\u5927\u5b66\u306b\u587e\u751f\u3092\u9001\u308a\u51fa\u3057\u3066\u3044\u307e\u3059\u3002<br \/>\u82f1\u6587\u8aad\u89e3\u529b\u3068\u65e5\u672c\u8a9e\u529b\u3068\u5171\u306b\u3001\u82f1\u4f5c\u6587\u529b\u304c\u5927\u304d\u306a\u30a6\u30a8\u30a4\u30c8\u3092\u5360\u3081\u307e\u3059\u3002<br \/>\u3057\u304b\u3057\u3001\u5341\u5206\u306a\u6307\u5c0e\u304c\u884c\u308f\u308c\u3066\u3044\u306a\u3044\u306e\u304c\u3001\u73fe\u5728\u306e\u82f1\u8a9e\u6307\u5c0e\u74b0\u5883\u306e\u5b9f\u614b\u3067\u3059\u3002<br \/>\u5f53\u587e\u3067\u306f\u3001\u5c11\u6570\u6307\u5c0e\u306b\u5fb9\u3059\u308b\u3053\u3068\u3067\u3061\u5bc6\u306a\u6dfb\u524a\u3092\u884c\u3063\u3066\u3044\u307e\u3059\u3002<\/p>\n<p>\u4e00\u90e8\u3054\u7d39\u4ecb\u3092\u3057\u307e\u3059\u3002<\/p>\n<h2>1 \u548c\u6587\u82f1\u8a33\u306e\u5834\u5408<\/h2>\n<p>\u554f\u984c\uff09<\/p>\n<p>\u79c1\u305f\u3061\u306b\u3068\u3063\u3066\u771f\u306e\u5e78\u798f\u3068\u306f\u3001\u4ed6\u8005\u3068\u306e\u3064\u306a\u304c\u308a\u306e\u4e2d\u306b\u3053\u305d\u898b\u51fa\u3057\u5f97\u308b\u3082\u306e\u3067\u3059\u3002\u3082\u3057\u3053\u306e\u4e16\u306b\u81ea\u5206\u4e00\u4eba\u3060\u3068\u3057\u305f\u3089\u3001\u767e\u4e07\u306e\u5bcc\u3092\u624b\u306b\u5165\u308c\u3001\u8d05\u6ca2\u4e09\u6627\u306e\u66ae\u3089\u3057\u3092\u3057\u305f\u3068\u3066\u3001\u305d\u3093\u306a\u3082\u306e\u306b\u4f55\u306e\u610f\u5473\u304c\u3042\u308a\u307e\u3057\u3087\u3046\u3002(7)\u82e6\u3057\u3044\u751f\u6d3b\u3092\u3057\u3066\u3044\u3066\u3082\u3001\u7b11\u9854\u306e\u7d76\u3048\u306a\u3044\u5bb6\u5ead\u3067\u66ae\u3089\u3059\u65b9\u304c\u306f\u308b\u304b\u306b\u5e78\u305b\u3067\u3059\u3002\u4eca\u65e5\u79c1\u305f\u3061\u304c\u76f4\u9762\u3059\u308b\u6700\u3082\u91cd\u8981\u306a\u8ab2\u984c\u306e\u4e00\u3064\u306f\u3001\u4eba\u3005\u304c\u304a\u4e92\u3044\u306b\u3044\u3064\u304f\u3057\u307f\u5408\u3044\u652f\u3048\u5408\u3046\u793e\u4f1a\u3092\u3044\u304b\u306b\u7bc9\u3044\u3066\u3044\u304f\u304b\u3068\u3044\u3046\u3053\u3068\u3067\u3059\u3002<\/p>\n<p>Original)\u3000\u587e\u751f\u306e\u7b54\u6848\u3000\u3000<\/p>\n<p>(1) In relations with others, (2) we can find the true of happiness.<br \/>(3) Even if only I were on the earth, (4) got a lot of fortune (5) and lived luxurious lives, (6) such things would be worthless.<br \/>(7) Also, even if our life is in poor, (8) we are happy as long as we are always smile.<br \/>(9) One of the most important challenges which today we are confronted with is how we (10) establish the society (11) that people are considerate of others and help (12) each other.<\/p>\n<p>Corrections)\u3000\u6dfb\u524a\u3068\u66f8\u304d\u63db\u3048<\/p>\n<p>(2) We can find true happiness (1) in our relationships with other people. (3) If we were all alone on the earth, (4) even if we had gotten a lot of fortune (5) living our luxurious lives, (6) this would be worthless. (7) Even if we are worried about our lives, (8) we feel happy as long as our family members always have smiles. (9) One of the most important challenges today that we are confronted with is how we can (10) establish a society (11) in which people are considerate of others and help (12) one another.<\/p>\n<p>\u587e\u9577\u306b\u3088\u308b\u4f8b\u6587)<\/p>\n<p>True happiness won\u2019t likely be accepted without the bond between others and us. If you were all alone on Earth, even if you\u2019d acquired an enormous amount of wealth enough for a rich life, could this be valuable? I feel in spite of your troubles, your family lives full of smiles will create more happiness. One of the most essential topics today is to consider how to build a society that can lead everyone to support one another with consideration.<\/p>\n<p>\u8a55\u4fa1\uff09\u7121\u99c4\u306a\u8a00\u3044\u56de\u3057\u3084\u82f1\u6587\u304c\u5c11\u306a\u304f\u8aad\u307f\u3084\u3059\u304f\u306a\u308a\u307e\u3057\u305f\u3002\u8a9e\u5f59\u3084\u6587\u6cd5\u306b\u6c17\u3092\u3064\u3051\u3066\u3001\u3080\u3064\u304b\u3057\u3044\u8868\u73fe\u306f\u3057\u306a\u3044\u3067\u66f8\u3044\u3066\u4e0b\u3055\u3044\u3002\u6dfb\u524a\u3084\u4f8b\u6587\u3067\u306e\u8868\u73fe\u65b9\u6cd5\u306f\u53c2\u8003\u306b\u3002<\/p>\n<p>1.\u25b3\u3000\u526f\u8a5e\u53e5\u3092\u6587\u982d\u306b\u6301\u3063\u3066\u304f\u308b\u306e\u306f\u3001\u5f37\u8abf\u3059\u308b\u3068\u304b\u6d41\u308c\u304c\u3044\u3044\u3068\u304b\u306e\u76ee\u7684\u306f\u3042\u308b\u304c\u3001\u3053\u3053\u3067\u306f\u5fc5\u8981\u306a\u3044\u3068\u601d\u3046\u3002relations \u3068relationships \u304c\u3042\u308a\u307e\u3059\u304c\u3001\u5e83\u304f\u4f7f\u3046\u306e\u306f\u5f8c\u8005\u3067\u3059\u3002<\/p>\n<p>2.\u25b3\u3000\u30b7\u30f3\u30d7\u30eb\u306b<\/p>\n<p>3.\u25b3\u3000\u00d7only I were \u2192we were all alone \u3072\u3068\u308a\u307c\u3063\u3061<\/p>\n<p>4.\u25b3\u3000we got ~<\/p>\n<p>5.\u25b3\u3000our~<\/p>\n<p>6.\u25b3\u3000\u30b7\u30f3\u30d7\u30eb\u306b<\/p>\n<p>4.(5)(6) \u306e\u3064\u306a\u3052\u65b9\u3000P<\/p>\n<p>7.\u00d7 P<\/p>\n<p>8.\u25b3\u3000\u00d7are always smile \u306f\u3000are always smiling \u3068\u304b\u3002\u3000P<\/p>\n<p>9.\u25b3\u3000which today \u2192\u3000today which \/ that<\/p>\n<p>10.\u25b3\u3000a\u7279\u5b9a\u306e\u793e\u4f1a\u3067\u306a\u304f\u4e00\u822c\u7684\u306a\u793e\u4f1a\u3060\u304b\u3089\u3001a society<\/p>\n<p>11.\u00d7\u3000in which<\/p>\n<p>12.\u3007\u3000each other 2\u4eba\u306e\u9593\u306e\u304a\u4e92\u3044\u3000one another 3\u4eba\u306e\u9593\u3000\u3067\u3057\u305f\u304c\u6700\u8fd1\u306f\u533a\u5225\u3057\u3066\u3044\u306a\u3044\u69d8\u5b50\u3060\u304c\u3001one another \u304c\u3044\u3044\u3067\u3057\u3087\u3046<\/p>\n<h2>2 \u81ea\u7531\u82f1\u4f5c\u6587\u306e\u5834\u5408<\/h2>\n<p>\u554f\u984c\uff09<\/p>\n<p>If you could invent something to make the world a better place to live, what would you invent?<\/p>\n<p>Original)\u3000\u587e\u751f\u306e\u7b54\u6848\u3000<\/p>\n<p>I would like to invent eco-friendly cleaner.<\/p>\n<p>These days, (1) I see a lot of garbage (2) such as pet bottles or plastic bags on (3) streets. (4) I also know (5) many (6) voluntears over the world (7) try to clean towns. I have attended (8) these activities (9) more than once, (10) too.<\/p>\n<p>However,(11) in cities, there are huge amount of garbages (12) so that people can\u2019t clear streets or rivers of garbages by themselves.<\/p>\n<p>I think (13) it is important to rely on robots at these inevitable cases.<\/p>\n<p>Eco-friendly (14) cleaner, (15) I wrote the first sentence, (16) don\u2019t clean your room with a little enegy, (17) but clean out of your home.<\/p>\n<p>Robots are different from (18) human beings (19) in that they (20) are not tired and they are able to (21) operate at their best condition all times.<\/p>\n<p>(22) Now is the time (23)\u00a0 when human beings cooperate with robots to reserve the environment.<\/p>\n<p>Corrections\uff09\u3000\u6dfb\u524a\u3068\u66f8\u304d\u63db\u3048<\/p>\n<p>I would like to invent an eco-friendly cleaner.<\/p>\n<p>These days, (1) (I see a lot of garbage \/ everywhere we go, we are greeted by the sight of garbage) (2), such as pet bottles or plastic bags on (3) the streets. (4) I am also aware that (5) so many (6) volunteers over the world are (7) (trying \/ doing their part) to clean towns. I myself have attended (8) some of these kinds of activities (9) several times (10) before.<\/p>\n<p>However, (11) there is such a huge amount of garbage everywhere, including in cities, (12) that evidently, some power besides manpower is necessary to clear the streets or rivers of garbage.<\/p>\n<p>I think (13) it would be a splendid idea to have robots help in this inevitable case.<\/p>\n<p>Eco-friendly (14) cleaners, (15) as mentioned in the opening sentence, (16) don\u2019t sweep your rooms, (17) but can get rid of all wastes and garbage from places out of doors.<\/p>\n<p>Robots are different from (18) men (19), in that they (20) (never get exhausted \/ can work tirelessly) and are able to (21) go on operating at best conditions.<\/p>\n<p>(22) (Now is the time \/ There is no better time than now ) (23) for the cooperation of human beings with robots for environmental conservation.<\/p>\n<p>\u8a55\u4fa1\uff09\u8aad\u307f\u3084\u3059\u304f\u3001\u30b9\u30bf\u30a4\u30eb\u3082\u6574\u3063\u3066\u3044\u307e\u3059\u3002\u4ee5\u4e0b<\/p>\n<p>1\uff09\u3007\u3000P<\/p>\n<p>2)\u30ab\u30f3\u30de<\/p>\n<p>3\uff09\u8981the \u4e00\u822c\u8868\u73fe\u3067\u3082\u5fc5\u8981\u3067\u3001\u7279\u6b8a\u306a\u4f8b<\/p>\n<p>4\uff09\u3007\u3000P<\/p>\n<p>5\uff09\u25b3\u3000so \u304c\u3042\u308b\u65b9\u304c\u6d41\u308c\u304c\u826f\u3044\u3002<\/p>\n<p>6) \u00d7\u3000spelling<\/p>\n<p>7)\u25b3\u3000\u9032\u884c\u5f62\u306e\u65b9\u304c\u826f\u3044\u3002\u3000P<\/p>\n<p>8)\u3007\u3000P<\/p>\n<p>9)\u3007\u3000P<\/p>\n<p>10)\u3007 P<\/p>\n<p>11)12) \u25b3\u3000\u306e\u3064\u306a\u304c\u308a\u306f\u3001so \/ such~that \u69cb\u6587\u3092\u7528\u3044\u308b\u3068\u826f\u3044\u3002<\/p>\n<p>garbage\u306f\u540d\u8a5e\u306a\u306e\u3067\u3001such~that\u3092\u4f7f\u3046<\/p>\n<p>garbage\u306f\u7269\u8cea\u540d\u8a5e\u3067\u4e0d\u52a0\u7b97\u3002clear A of B; A\u304b\u3089B\u3092\u53d6\u308a\u9664\u304f<\/p>\n<p>12)\u306e\u4eba\u3060\u3051\u3067\u306f\u7121\u7406\u3001\u3068\u3044\u3046\u8868\u73fe\u304c\u3057\u305f\u3044\u306e\u3060\u308d\u3046\u304c\u3001P \u3092\u4f8b\u3068\u3057\u3066\u793a\u3057 \u3066\u304a\u304d\u307e\u3059\u3002<\/p>\n<p>13) \u25b3\u3000\u63a8\u91cf\u306a\u306e\u3067 would\u3002\u3000P<\/p>\n<p>14) \u25b3\u3000\u4e00\u822c\u8868\u73fe\u3000\u8907\u6570<\/p>\n<p>15) \u00d7\u3000\u2192which I wrote in the first sentence\u3000\u3000P<\/p>\n<p>16) \u25b3\u3000\u2192rooms, clean\/sweep\u53ef\u3000\u3000P<\/p>\n<p>17) \u00d7\u3000P<\/p>\n<p>18) \u3007\u3000P<\/p>\n<p>19) \u30ab\u30f3\u30de<\/p>\n<p>20) \u25b3\u3000\u75b2\u308c\u3066\u3044\u306a\u3044\u3001\u3088\u308a\u75b2\u308c\u306a\u3044\u3001\u3068\u3044\u3046\u8868\u73fe\u304c\u6b32\u3057\u3044<\/p>\n<p>21) \u3007\u3000P<\/p>\n<p>22) 23) \u00d7 21)\u304b\u3089\u5f8c\u306e\u3064\u306a\u304c\u308a\u306f\u3001P \u306e\u3088\u3046\u306b\u3002<\/p>\n<h2>3 \u81ea\u7531\u82f1\u4f5c\u6587\u306e\u5834\u5408(2)<\/h2>\n<p>\u554f\u984c)<\/p>\n<p>Big companies have a positive effect on society\u3000<\/p>\n<p>Original)<\/p>\n<p>(1) I agree with this opinion.<br \/>(2) First, big companies can establish steady economic society.<br \/>(3)\u00a0They manufacture and sell so many, good production that a lot of money are generated.\u00a0\u00a0<br \/>(4) As a result, the interests give our society economic wealth.<br \/>(5) Indeed, there are many famous, big companies in advanced countries.<br \/>(6) Second, big companies affect our society in terms of population.<br \/>(7) Even though a town is a small town and it have few population, if factories of big companies are built in this town, many employments would move to this town and this town would be crowded.<br \/>(8)Big companies can help refrain decrease population in rural area and increase population in large city, too.(9) Therefore, I think big companies are important to establish good society and development society.<\/p>\n<p>Corrections)<br \/>(1) I think of this idea as acceptable, that big companies have a positive effect on society.<br \/>(2) They\u00a0have a great ability to steadily maintain\u00a0economic conditions\u00a0in a good way.<br \/>(3) They can manufacture and sell a large amount of products,\u00a0and generate various resources, including huge volumes of money.<br \/>(4)They could eventually lead\u00a0our society to be more wealthy.<br \/>(5) In fact, the number of the people who are not worried about their lives could (be low \/ actually drop) in countries where prominent firms can be seen.<br \/>(6) They will\u00a0also affect the increase or decrease of the population.<br \/>(7) If, in a town with a small\u00a0population, for example, a big company builds its factory, employment opportunities will likely be created, and the population would also be expected to be larger.<br \/>(8)\u00a0Big company activities\u00a0can help deal both with the decrease in the population\u00a0of\u00a0rural areas and with the rise in that of\u00a0large cities.<br \/>(9) They have a potentiality to contribute to social development.<\/p>\n<p>\u8a55\u4fa1\uff09\u5168\u4f53\u8a00\u3044\u305f\u3044\u3053\u3068\u306f\u5206\u304b\u308a\u307e\u3059\u3002<br \/>\u3057\u304b\u3057\u3001(a) wording\u8a9e\u5f59\u306e\u4f7f\u3044\u65b9 (b)logic\u8ad6\u7406\u3001\u306e2\u70b9\u3067\u6587\u3068\u6587\u306e\u3064\u306a\u304c\u308a\u304c\u4e0d\u5341\u5206\u3067\u4f55\u3092\u8a00\u3044\u305f\u3044\u306e\u304b\u7406\u89e3\u3057\u306b\u304f\u3044\u6240\u304c\u3042\u308a\u307e\u3059\u3002<br \/>\u307b\u3068\u3093\u3069paraphrasing\u66f8\u304d\u63db\u3048\u3092\u3057\u307e\u3057\u305f\u3002\u8868\u73fe\u306e\u4ed5\u65b9\u3068\u7528\u3044\u308b\u8a9e\u5f59\/\u5358\u8a9e\u3092\u5b66\u3093\u3067\u4e0b\u3055\u3044\u3002<br 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